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Dreams send you away
there an hour ago here today
Where things are never as the seem
and nothing is a structured scheme.

You can fly way above the clouds
run naked without a care through the crowds
You can dive down beneath the rolling waves
and dance around the empty graves.

You can swim through lakes of earth
and sell the world for all it's worth
You can drown in the fires of love
and soar with eagles along the stars above.

Time ticks past in ways unheard
fixated on each particular word
With a crack and a boom
you are sent from the gloom.

Only to awake the next day
but you shall not keep me away
for when night once again does return
for i long of the beauty of the nocturne.
:D Not one of my 100 theme poetry challenges but I felt like posting this :D I so hope you like it. Please leave a comment letting me know what you think.
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Ivorylies Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
love the dream theme
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Hattie5v5 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Thanks I'm glad you liked it :iconchuwyplz:
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reflectionsinwater Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Rhythm is very well done :)
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Hattie5v5 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
:D Thank you, I'm glad it turned out alright :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
:D Good poetry! You did well with the Dream topic. :)
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Hattie5v5 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
:D Thanks I'm so glad you liked it
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
You're very welcome! :XD:
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Beautiful rhyming~ =)
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Hattie5v5 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
:) Thank you and thank you for the fave and llama :squee: :hug:
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
You're welcome! ^^ :huggle:
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